사용자토론:Lim Ji Won
새 주제마지막 댓글: Capoco1234님 (4년 전)
Hello I'm learning in social development. I read your articles and suggest some comments. Your article interesting, but there is too short to read. You should write more text now. And you didn't have citation. This is not trustworthy. I hope to make your articles more articulate. Capoco1234 (토론) 2020년 5월 24일 (일) 23:32 (KST)